I Just Dont Know What Went Wrong by DerJose, literature
Literature
I Just Dont Know What Went Wrong
I Just Don't Know What Went Wrong
What is it that she means to us.
What is it that we see.
To others it is wrong,
But not to you or me.
She is everything we hope for.
She is everything thats great.
To love without submission
And love despite the hate.
This is what we strive for.
This is what she does mean.
To love and laugh as equals
For shes more than just a meme.
I Just Don't Know What Went Wrong.
The world did not accept.
The world did not receive.
What she brought up and gave to them,
With open eyes upon her dream.
They took her and said no.
They took and threw away.
But no matter what she says,
They shrink and turn
Within the field of red,
forever shall she sit,
Under tree of green,
it holds her like a child,
And keeps her safe,
from harmful rays,
that would shine down on her,
While she sits in meadow red,
she reads and reads and reads,
Never caring who might pass,
upon that barren road,
For shes lost within her words,
that sing great songs to her.
No one knows, why she sits,
And reads there every day,
They leave her be, to herself,
To never question her.
Her only friends are bees,
Butterflies and more,
The trees and flowers,
Aunts and uncles,
Moon and Sun her parents
The elements are her kin,
Which she talks to every da
Never has the ever night, looked the way you do,
To compare you to the moon so bright,
Tis' a foolish thing to do.
While moon does fade a bit each night,
Stay as bright as bright you do,
Without the wax or wane,
Of any of the moons
In your direction I now look,
my eyes are at a squint,
your light is greater than a star,
that shows its light at night
But fool be, to view you same as the stars
Their lights go out at a twinkle, and turn blacker than the sea
While yours is ever brighter, and now shines down on me
Let me come back down to earth, and see what I can do
The bubbles in a brook, does sing the sweetest songs
But put p
I Just Dont Know What Went Wrong by DerJose, literature
Literature
I Just Dont Know What Went Wrong
I Just Don't Know What Went Wrong
What is it that she means to us.
What is it that we see.
To others it is wrong,
But not to you or me.
She is everything we hope for.
She is everything thats great.
To love without submission
And love despite the hate.
This is what we strive for.
This is what she does mean.
To love and laugh as equals
For shes more than just a meme.
I Just Don't Know What Went Wrong.
The world did not accept.
The world did not receive.
What she brought up and gave to them,
With open eyes upon her dream.
They took her and said no.
They took and threw away.
But no matter what she says,
They shrink and turn
Within the field of red,
forever shall she sit,
Under tree of green,
it holds her like a child,
And keeps her safe,
from harmful rays,
that would shine down on her,
While she sits in meadow red,
she reads and reads and reads,
Never caring who might pass,
upon that barren road,
For shes lost within her words,
that sing great songs to her.
No one knows, why she sits,
And reads there every day,
They leave her be, to herself,
To never question her.
Her only friends are bees,
Butterflies and more,
The trees and flowers,
Aunts and uncles,
Moon and Sun her parents
The elements are her kin,
Which she talks to every da
Hey if you are interested I have some extra time on me. If you have someone that you would like to give something special for or if there is an anniversary of any kind I would be more than happy to help you write something for them.
Hi, I just thought I would let you know I took some time and went over my Chapter 6: Running Back Screaming (Dragon Age 2 fan fiction) I took some of your advice. and I thought I'd see if you'd mind looking at it again to see if I did it any better justice. I tried to add some more depth to the story. The last paper I wrote before starting this fan fic was a paper justifying the use of an isothermal amplification assay to detect Haemophilus influenzae b.... so if that isn't any indicator of how out of pace I am with writing fiction stories I don't know what is lol.
But here's the link if you're interested in seeing the changes I've made. I haven't touched CH 5 yet.. that won't be until the weekend. [link]